need a rank

[East Renegade]

ight this is from a battle i just did with young chopz on another site, rank it up lol

i'll release~the~beast on this pork~chop, cause this dork~drop in against the cease~in~east//
his flow is gonna get abused~n~molested like a bruise~thats~infectious, this niggas rhymes are gonna get worse, like how his lines are non~treatable like a STD, fuck nigga ur facein against a non~beatable sick MC!!(ha ha get it)//

nigga i'll tear~u~apart startin from the brain~to~heart, gettin rid of ur mind~and~soul//
so now ur left with fear~to~start, i'm strainin~ur~art, n left u blind~n~hole(not whole)//

this nigga probly gets his ass~teared up more then askin~queers, blowin~dicks cause he knos those hoeish~tricks, nigga gonna get mad cause his ass~got~sprayed lyrically, kind of like harass~in~gays satrically//
fuck this nigga couldnt cum~hard even if his semen~was~cement, thats y he likes dudes in his bum~scar in his hole like demons~in~torment!!//

my rhymes are like an contagious~reflection, this nigga gonna try to spit back at me but i'll flip his lines so its an outrageous~rejection//
the connection between this rook~n~me is none, he's shit and couldnt b hard even if his dick had an erection, this nigga aint even straight he's a crook~ed~mc!!!//

[.:Young Chopz:.]

Id Rank You Heavy Let See Wha Tha Rest Gon Say

[cap0n3]

i agree wit chops

[.:Young Chopz:.]

1 More Sayin you Heavy And Heavys Yah Rank

[=FlowDesign=]

Heavyweight

Renegade half of the name for my site LMFAO

[.:Young Chopz:.]

Ight You A Heavy..Forum LocKed

[.:4Real:.]

Its aigh buh i cant really understand where a bar ends or starts on ya structure so i wouldn be good at rankin this..... maybe ya should try ta shorten and make ya bars more clear of where it starts and ends, jus a surggestion, other than that i laughed at that cum hard shit